Holy crap man! AWESOME!
Man, you surely are talented, talented to the point of why aren't you working for game companies and such right now?!
The way it was set out in flash was goo, I liked how you put it on old style paper, it gave it a more detailed look. Your pictures... Well... They could be worse... Becasue it's going to be bloody hard to get better than that, I mean some of them were outstanding, you should be proud.
10/10, if I could give you more to fix the average, I would, but can't, heh.
Anyway, keep up the good stuff, it would be awesome to play this game for I read just about all of what you put and I think I'll like it. Sounds like it would be set out like Final Fantasy so yeah, awesomeness man.
-Mathew Zev (Zabre1)
(not full last name but I find it funny one of the characters were named that, heh)